Saturday, 22 October 2011

Working on Saturdays

Is there any other job which I can jump into a bag full of leaves!  Spend all summer out in the sun and get a lovley tan! Well if there is let me know!

I've had a brilliant day today. We mowed loads of lawns annd there was a big pile of leaves... I really wanted to jump in it! But I had to pile it into a big bag. So when the bag was full I squished it into the bag instead.

And I came home to a lovley custard pie! Yummy!  so it might be short and it might not be very interesting so... heres a little extract that I wrote while doing some character plotting.


Leaning in to type Wade found himself smiling.  He knew she was right behind him and now he just couldn’t concentrate he tried several times to touch the keys and type a paragraph, a sentence, even one word would do. Sighing he looked down at his feet.
“I really can’t concentrate with you there.”
She stepped forward and put an arm around his neck and rubbed his shoulders.
“Is this better?” she asked close to his ear. He leant back in his seat the computer and his report forgotten and closed his eyes. There were so many feelings and so many different thoughts going round in his mind then she stopped and he felt something else.
A kiss.
Their very first kiss.

Fireworks would be to cliché. Forever wouldn’t be long enough. And it would have been perfect if Max hadn’t walked in.

Max didn’t say anything, he simply stood there lost in the moment the two were sharing wishing he could tear Wade apart with his eyes
Both of them had there eyes closed and if they had opened them they would have been too lost in each other for either one of them to even notice Max.

He backed away and out of the room slowly coming across Switch on his way to see Wade. Putting out an arm he pulled him short of the door.
“He’s a little busy Switch.” Max said anger rising. He suddenly wondered why he had stopped Switch going in, in the first place. “With Vixen.” He added in a short harsh voice.


well. there you go!

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